Year 9 have written some powerful stuff on the 9/11 disaster – based on Simon Armitage’s poem ‘Out of the Blue’. Watch a performance of Armitage’s poem here https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ufZey15WTAk
And then read their responses below. Nice work team!
9/11
People falling from the sky,
People dying day and night,
Many suffer,
Many die,
Many people cry and cry.
News travels at the speed of light,
Shocking many in its path,
Breaking hearts,
Killing hopes,
Brace yourself for disgraceful jokes.
The sound of the explosion brings many to their knees,
The famous landmark collapses before our eyes,
The bill to America is on the rise,
As many years of work,
Tumbles, tumbles, down.
Taste the fear in the air,
Smell the ignited fire of anger,
Burning lives,
Crushing happiness,
Killing, the innocent.
By Mark Dearden 9S2
Wow! What an impressive poem.
lovely poem mark
really well done
amazing mark a good poem
Well done mark. congrats, a very well thought out and structured poem